Number 5: write a poem about your favorite place.
buying the tickets
planning the trip
driving the miles
renting a room
changing my clothes
waiting in line
pushing way forward
getting hand stamped
running down stairs
breathless with anticipation
giddy with joy
heart thumping wildly
lights go down
crowd surges ahead
chanting, pounding, jumping
stars in eyes
back-stage dreams
front-row reality
my fave place
at a concert
with Phoenix headlining
in las vegas Sept '10. that's me making a weird face. found this on a las vegas news site. was totally shocked to say the least!!
relax,
paulina
7 comments:
breathless with anticipation
giddy with joy
heart thumping wildly
Sounds like tons of fun! I can tell you had a great time and what a sweet spot right up front and caught on camera! How exciting!
Beautifully done! Hi, just visiting from Mama Kat!
Chris
Wow. That is great. I love your style of writing. Refreshing : )
Great description. It feels like being there.
Cute! I wrote a poem too about another prompt...still working on the non-rhyming type- LOL! Very descriptive!
Stopping by from Mama Kat's...
Thanks everyone! I'm glad you liked it :) I'm also glad that the excitement came through, I was lucky enough to see them 8 times during their last tour - and it never got old!!
You really captured the moment here! I love this part:
stars in eyes
back-stage dreams
front-row reality
Glad to meet another blogger who loves to write! Let's follow each other!
christine
http://un-stitched.com/
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